First of all, congratulations on taking first place—this story absolutely deserves it.
This is the kind of children’s story that stays with you long after the reading ends. It’s gentle, protective, and filled with quiet magic, the kind that feels real rather than flashy. From the very beginning, Noah and Titus feel like children we know—especially Titus, whose tenderness and sensitivity are handled with such care and respect. The way you describe him, talking to dandelions and befriending squirrels, immediately sets the tone and makes him lovable in an authentic way.
What I loved most is how the story addresses something difficult—bullying—without ever becoming heavy or frightening for young readers. Instead, you wrap it in warmth, safety, and reassurance. Grey the owl is a beautiful creation: mysterious, calm, and protective without being violent or scary. He feels exactly right for a child’s imagination—strong enough to help, gentle enough to trust.
The bond between the cousins is another standout. Noah’s instinct to protect Titus, and Titus recognizing that same protection in Grey, is such a powerful and affirming moment. It quietly tells children that kindness and protection can take many forms, and that being watched over doesn’t always mean being seen.
I also love how the story leaves room for wonder. Grey doesn’t need explanations. He doesn’t need rules or origins. He simply is. That restraint is one of the story’s greatest strengths and makes the ending especially lovely. “Because some guardians don’t need words. Some just need wings.” That line is perfect.
You can feel how much love and intention went into this—both in the writing and in the way you engage with WDC as a whole. This is a story written by someone who truly cares about young readers, about storytelling, and about the power of gentle imagination. It’s exactly the kind of children’s story I love to read and love to write myself.
Thank you for sharing something so tender and meaningful. This win feels well-earned, and I hope this story finds many little listeners and readers who need it.
Kind wishes,
Tee
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