This is my review of Chapter 1 - The Cave of Worlds
I know this is the first chapter of a book, and even though you didn’t specifically ask me to read it, I’m really glad I did. I’ll admit that science fiction isn’t usually my go-to genre, but this felt different in a way that genuinely pulled me in.
What caught me right away was the atmosphere. The early-morning corridor, the sense of isolation, and those small, unsettling details created a quiet tension that kept building rather than announcing itself. I found Sebastian easy to connect with, especially the way his OCD is woven naturally into the narrative. It adds depth and makes his perspective feel authentic rather than stylized.
The mystery surrounding Wheft Enterprises is especially compelling. You don’t overexplain or rush the reveal, which I appreciated. The brief appearance of the man in the black suit and the lingering questions about what Sebastian is seeing—or thinks he’s seeing—gave the chapter an eerie edge that made me want to keep reading.
For someone who doesn’t typically gravitate toward science fiction, that says a lot. This feels grounded, character-driven, and intriguing, and it reads like the beginning of something much larger. I’m genuinely curious to see where this story goes next.
Kind wishes,
Tee
I didn't see where to give the stars and I know you don't like that part of reviewing but if given the chance this has 5 stars from me.
 
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 You last responded to this review 01/10/2026 @ 2:44pm EST |
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