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Given: Jan 10, 2026 at 3:42pm
Length: 1,068 Characters |
1,050 w/o WritingML
This is a review of Chapter 3: The Cave of Worlds
This chapter really deepens my interest in the story. The tension keeps building, but what I enjoy most is how grounded Sebastian remains, even as everything around him becomes more surreal. His reactions feel human and relatable, which makes the strange elements land even harder.
I especially like how the scent of sandalwood and myrrh continues to appear. You may have people argue until they’re blue in the face that the spelling is wrong, but you’re absolutely correct here — and I love how it adds to the atmosphere.
Marcus grows more intriguing with every scene, and the transition through the gate is vivid and unsettling in all the right ways. The world keeps opening up without feeling rushed or overexplained, and the ending leaves me eager to see what comes next.
Really enjoying where this is going.
I am taking a break right now from rewrites... but after dinner I will get back to it. You have provided me with a nice pleasant break.
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