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The Plan That Failed Open in new Window. [E]
A hidden plan collapses as soldiers close in, forcing Black-Eye to flee and survive.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A pirate, or some other criminal, is looking for buried gold in a swampy area. However, it seems that someone, presumably a rat, has told the authorities that they are in the area, and now the law is after them. Thus, as a result, the crew is forced to scatter, as well as hide. So, what will happen next?

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Characters look interesting, and I hope to learn more about them.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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