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Swan and Shadow
This is my favorite concrete poem. It can be difficult to understand at first especially since there is no punctuation but if you put a little effort and some punctuation into it, this poem is truly beautiful and makes use of visual and mental images in order to emphasize it's beauty and meaning.
Swan and Shadow
By John Hollander
Dusk
Above the
water hang the
loud
flies
Here
O so
gray
then
What A pale signal will appear
When Soon before its shadow fades
Where Here in this pool of opened eye
In us No Upon us As at the very edges
of where we take shape in the dark air
this object bares its image awakening
ripples of recognition that will
brush darkness up into light
even after this bird this hour both drift by atop the perfect sad instant now
already passing out of sight
toward yet-untroubled reflection
this image bears its object darkening
into memorial shades Scattered bits of
light No of water Or something across
water Breaking up No Being regathered
soon Yet by then a swan will have
gone Yes out of mind into what
vast
pale
hush
of a
place
past
sudden dark as
if a swan
sang
If you noticed there are words that are capitalized and they show the beginning of sentences. It is interesting to note that there are more words capitalized in the bottom part of the poem. Maybe they are trying to indicate ripples in the swan's shadow. Once punctuation is placed in the poem you get the sense that there are actually two voices(maybe more). To put it simply, there is one that questions and one that provides the answers.
I like that this poem talks about the last moments before the sun sets, dusk. I love dusk. Dusk is my favorite part of the day and the shortest part; it passes by very fast....it is like the day's swan song.
My favorite part of the poem is where the swan passes into shadow. How he leaves off talking of the swan and enters in to the shadow and describes that to us in such a beautiful manner.
There is so much to be said about this poem. There is so much going on.
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